a box and a Racoon were fighting in the endlass desert.they were fighting so fast they left fine dust behind them. the racoon got distracted by a motionless tarantula and the box was hiding behind a prickly cactus.the box ambushed the racoon. He was so injured he could hardly move. the racoon was crawling on the dirty dusty desert floor and then he could stand up. finally they both came across a siege and one of the men shot a canon at the racoon and the box. the racoon was humiliated. the racoon and box were fighting the siege all day long, they got sunburnt. they defeated siege!
will they be good friends?
May 23, 2020 at 8:55 am
Hey Cody,
Whoa! I just loved your descriptions… the endless desert, the motionless tarantula… Your reader becomes lost in your story, thanks to your effective descriptions. Great use of vocabulary, for example “ambushed” and “defeated”.
I am looking forward to your next piece!
🙂