Tow days have passed since my friend entered the cave. He hasn’t returned. I decided to enter the cave. The cave is pitch black and smells like rotten flesh. I walk a step forward and BANG i hit my head on a sharp rock. So i grab my torch from my backpack flashing it around closely be me to see if i can find anything. And then i heard a grizzle. That’s when i knew l should run but my body was quivering, I was so nervous everything started to spin around me, it all went black and I fainted.
June 8, 2020 at 7:15 am
Brilliant story, Cody! I love the vocabulary you have used and I love the structure of your story: it is perfectly paced for a 100 word challenge. Well done!!