I was travelling to Port mac i arrived at the beach i was on a camp i started getting in to bed the sky was black and purple the moon was glazing through the sky i saw a curved tree a wolf was howling no the mountain beside me i could not go to sleep because sky was so beautiful and the wolf was howling loudly.i can smell blood coming from the wolf thoughts rushing through my head i was tired i couldn’t get to sleep because of the wolf howling.i saw a blood trail and the wolf is there.
May 1, 2020 at 3:01 am
to RGN Cody
some of the things that you need to change in you’re story is: you had some capital but some no as well and the sentice when it says no mountain its says no the mountain that doesnt make sence
May 2, 2020 at 7:28 am
What a lovely job you did with your descriptions, Cody! You created a really inspiring world that I would enjoy visiting. I loved the sentence where you explained you couldn’t sleep because of the beauty of the sky (and the howl of the wolf).
My wish here is actually about your blog: the image behind the text makes it very hard, almost impossible to read. Come and see me next week and we can see how we can fix this.